Double Page Spread

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Peer Feedback

I really like the layout of you contents page as it looks conventional. Your use of original images are really good and clear too.

You could maybe improve by adding some text near the QR code for example, you could use a website for your magazine, because I think it looks a little bit random on it's own.

Overall I really like it, and it's original! Keep it up!
Lauren Richardson :-)

Peer Feedback

I really like the photo of the main feature as the stars on her face relate to the description you wrote which is good, i like the colours you have used they work really well together.
For an improvement i think you could make the 'contents' text a little bigger to stand out a bit more.

Lauren Lewis