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Feedback Response
Feedback Response
With this feedback I think I am not going to change the image as I like the way it goes against conventions but I am going to add more coverlines and also try to make the image more vibrant.
With this feedback I think I am not going to change the image as I like the way it goes against conventions but I am going to add more coverlines and also try to make the image more vibrant.
Peer Feedback - Jacob Kay
Name of person giving feedback: Jacob Kay
Overall Assessment of blog: All posts are backed up with great descriptions as to why they relate to the production of their final front cover.
Strengths of front cover: Main image is really effective and looks professional.
The layout of the front cover also is conventional to music magazines making it look like an actual professional cover.
Areas for development: Main image on a front cover is conventionally a mid-shot so including this may make this cover look more professional.
Overall Assessment of blog: All posts are backed up with great descriptions as to why they relate to the production of their final front cover.
Strengths of front cover: Main image is really effective and looks professional.
The layout of the front cover also is conventional to music magazines making it look like an actual professional cover.
Areas for development: Main image on a front cover is conventionally a mid-shot so including this may make this cover look more professional.
Peer Feedback
Jonny Page
A lot of effort put into the blog and a lot of information has been given, the process is good and well explained.
Peer Feedback
Danny Birdsall
Very good blog, each piece of work that you've posted is really detailed and you can tell you've put a lot of effort into each piece. As for the drafts, although the design of them does improve with each draft and the final draft looks really good, the fact that each draft uses the same image becomes slightly repetitive and dull, but that's not really a big problem for the overall blog.
Very good blog, each piece of work that you've posted is really detailed and you can tell you've put a lot of effort into each piece. As for the drafts, although the design of them does improve with each draft and the final draft looks really good, the fact that each draft uses the same image becomes slightly repetitive and dull, but that's not really a big problem for the overall blog.
Peer Feedback by Amelia R
I think that this blog is good because there are extra posts other than the ones that were required.
The strengths of the front cover are the colour scheme and the text, i like the way that the colours match with the image. Also the mast head looks really professional.
I think that the front cover could be improved by making the image more vibrant.
The strengths of the front cover are the colour scheme and the text, i like the way that the colours match with the image. Also the mast head looks really professional.
I think that the front cover could be improved by making the image more vibrant.
Peer feedback
Becky Marrow
From looking at your blog I can see you've tried really hard, I can see the process you went through to make your final front cover really clearly and I think that your final draft is really well done, it fits the genre of your magazine really well and I can see where you've got your inspiration from your research.
Your front cover is good, the masthead is bright and eye-catching and the bands you've mentioned on your cover lines fit the genre well. The artist in your main image fits the style of your magazine, and I think that overall it looks very professional, I also like that you went against convention and used a long shot instead of a mid-shot for your main image.
I think to improve your magazine you could add a few more cover lines to make it look a bit more full as this would maybe interest readers more.
From looking at your blog I can see you've tried really hard, I can see the process you went through to make your final front cover really clearly and I think that your final draft is really well done, it fits the genre of your magazine really well and I can see where you've got your inspiration from your research.
Your front cover is good, the masthead is bright and eye-catching and the bands you've mentioned on your cover lines fit the genre well. The artist in your main image fits the style of your magazine, and I think that overall it looks very professional, I also like that you went against convention and used a long shot instead of a mid-shot for your main image.
I think to improve your magazine you could add a few more cover lines to make it look a bit more full as this would maybe interest readers more.
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